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Debbie graces the cover in her "new" form - perceptive readers might notice an upgraded cup size.  The .cbz for Book 11 can be dow...

Tuesday, July 13, 2021

Millennium Products Update 10.0: Back to the Company

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There's a bit of change here - in the text, Linda discusses her decision to visit the company after Kate's session with Mr Stone. 

Here, I shifted that to a new elevator scene and made it into more of a conversation. Kate highlights the implication of visiting Millennium Products here - something that's not entirely clear in the text and only explored in detail as the story progresses (possibly due to the episodic nature of the chapters when they were first written). Linda is essentially submitting to the company on her own accord to become a 'recruiter' like her mom (it's not like she actually had a choice, to be honest - but the self submission here is important).

Regarding Linda's clothes - I started out wanting to feature the under layer of her uniform, but it's kind of odd for the dress code in school to be a short-sleeved blouse under a blazer. A long sleeved blouse, on the other hand, felt a bit too formal... and not to mention that the Studio NEO software doesn't do sleeved clothes well.... maybe a summer version of the uniform, then... ?